Can someone translate this into real English?

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ampos

Oh my God, it is full of stars!

But our sky is not only full of stars, but also of butterflies, hearts, snowflakes,... and all of them, glowing with colors!

Expand your art experience with this new kind of painting tool, while you get some fun and relax yourself!

Also, your kids will be very entertained while playing with a sky full of dreams.

An peacefull music will accompany during gameplay, and some beautifull sparkly sound when you spread fairy magic on your screen!

Glowing Sky has a ton of settings to play with, and a unique feature: automatic rain. Fill the screen with your desired figure or color, and watch this relaxing experience.

Another unique fearture will make this even more enjoyable: gravity movement. Tilt your device to move the raining figures.

Glowing Sky let you

-Draw with glowing pincels.
-Blinking animated figures.
-Relax and fun to play with.
-Unlimited particles on screen.
-Ton of settings to play with.
-Rain (auto) particle system.
-Gravitational rain.
-Different settings for rain particles and finger particles.
-Peacefull harpsichord music
-Accompaining sprakle sounds.
-Universal: iphone, retina and ipad screen displays.
-Multitask on iOS4.

If you like Glowing Sky, please, rate it on the AppStore.

*If you want to save a image, just press HOME+POWER buttons at the same time.
check my web and/or my blog :D
http://diniplay.blogspot.com (devblog)
http://www.ampostata.org
http://ampostata.blogspot.com
I own PC-Win, MacBook 13", iPhone 3G/3GS/4G and iPAC-WinCE

matchy

Quote from: ampos on 2011-May-30
Oh my God, it is full of stars!

But our sky is not only full of stars, but also of butterflies, hearts, snowflakes,... and all of them, glowing with colors!

Expand your art experience with this new kind of painting tool, while you get some fun and relax yourself!

Also, your kids will be very entertained while playing with a sky full of dreams.

An peacefull music will accompany during gameplay, and some beautifull sparkly sound when you spread fairy magic on your screen!

Glowing Sky has a ton of settings to play with, and a unique feature: automatic rain. Fill the screen with your desired figure or color, and watch this relaxing experience.

Another unique fearture will make this even more enjoyable: gravity movement. Tilt your device to move the raining figures.

Glowing Sky let you

-Draw with glowing pincels.
-Blinking animated figures.
-Relax and fun to play with.
-Unlimited particles on screen.
-Ton of settings to play with.
-Rain (auto) particle system.
-Gravitational rain.
-Different settings for rain particles and finger particles.
-Peacefull harpsichord music
-Accompaining sprakle sounds.
-Universal: iphone, retina and ipad screen displays.
-Multitask on iOS4.

If you like Glowing Sky, please, rate it on the AppStore.

*If you want to save a image, just press HOME+POWER buttons at the same time.


No Fake English detected.  :D The corrections are with spelling and grammar that Firefox picked up.  :whip:

Oh my God, it is full of stars!

But our The sky is not only full of stars, but also of butterflies, hearts, snowflakes,... and all of them, glowing with colors!

Expand your art experience with this new kind of painting tool, while you get some fun and relax yourself!

Also, your kids will be very entertained while playing with a sky full of dreams.

Peaceful music will accompany during game-play, and some beautiful sparkly sound when you spread fairy magic on your screen!

Glowing Sky has a ton of settings to play with, and a unique feature: automatic rain. Fill the screen with your desired figure or color, and watch this relaxing experience.

Another unique fearture will make this even more enjoyable: gravity movement. Tilt your device to move the raining figures.

Glowing Sky let you

-Draw with glowing pencils.
-Blinking animated figures.
-Relax and fun to play with.
-Unlimited particles on screen.
-Ton of settings to play with.
-Rain (auto) particle system.
-Gravitational rain.
-Different settings for rain particles and finger particles.
-Peaceful harpsichord music
-Accompanying sparkle sounds.
-Universal: iPhone, retina and iPad screen displays.
-Multitasking on iOS4.

If you like Glowing Sky, please, rate it on the AppStore.

*If you want to save a image, just press HOME+POWER buttons at the same time.

Moru

Only thing standing out to me is that you write "Glowing Sky let you" and then you write one line that fits in on this start of the sentence, the rest does not fit in on the start.

Glowing Sky let you draw with gloving pencils.
Glowing Sky let you blinking animated figures. <- does not make sense. Can you blink animated figures? Draw figures?
Glowing Sky let you relax and is fun to play with.

No time for more, sorry :-)

ampos

I will change it to "Glowing Sky features:"
check my web and/or my blog :D
http://diniplay.blogspot.com (devblog)
http://www.ampostata.org
http://ampostata.blogspot.com
I own PC-Win, MacBook 13", iPhone 3G/3GS/4G and iPAC-WinCE

Adley

Quote from: ampos on 2011-May-30
Oh my God, it is full of stars!

But our sky is not only full of stars, but also of butterflies, hearts, snowflakes,... and all of them, glowing with colors!

Expand your art experience with this new kind of painting tool, while you get some fun and relax yourself!

Also, your kids will be very entertained while playing with a sky full of dreams.






An peacefull music will accompany during gameplay, and some beautifull sparkly sound when you spread fairy magic on your screen!

Glowing Sky has a ton of settings to play with, and a unique feature: automatic rain. Fill the screen with your desired figure or color, and watch this relaxing experience.

Another unique fearture will make this even more enjoyable: gravity movement. Tilt your device to move the raining figures.

Glowing Sky let you

-Draw with glowing pincels.
-Blinking animated figures.
-Relax and fun to play with.
-Unlimited particles on screen.
-Ton of settings to play with.
-Rain (auto) particle system.
-Gravitational rain.
-Different settings for rain particles and finger particles.
-Peacefull harpsichord music
-Accompaining sprakle sounds.
-Universal: iphone, retina and ipad screen displays.
-Multitask on iOS4.

If you like Glowing Sky, please, rate it on the AppStore.

*If you want to save a image, just press HOME+POWER buttons at the same time.


Dear, its already in good English. I can't understand your point what you want ?? I think to improve its grammar? And you need it to be UK English or USA language.

ampos

Quote from: Adley on 2011-May-31
Dear, its already in good English. I can't understand your point what you want ?? I think to improve its grammar? And you need it to be UK English or USA language.

I would't like to sound as a google translator. Anyway, thank you.

I just studied english at high school for 3 years. The rest was learned with the Amiga computer: nothing was in spanish!  :rtfm:
check my web and/or my blog :D
http://diniplay.blogspot.com (devblog)
http://www.ampostata.org
http://ampostata.blogspot.com
I own PC-Win, MacBook 13", iPhone 3G/3GS/4G and iPAC-WinCE